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【高一作文请打分.30分制第一篇:FailureIsTheMotherOFTheSucceessWemiddleschoolstudenthavehadmanytestsorexams,ASaresult,themajorityofusmightsucceedorfailinthemHowever,theattitudestowardsfailurearevaryingfromp】
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高一作文请打分.30分制

第一篇:FailureIsTheMotherOFTheSucceess

Wemiddleschoolstudenthavehadmanytestsorexams,ASaresult,themajorityofusmightsucceedorfailinthemHowever,theattitudestowardsfailurearevaryingfrompersontoperson.Withsortingthemout,Iputthemintotwodifferentclassifications.

thepeoplewhofacethefailurewithpositivemoodwillencouragethemselves,andgainconfidenceonceagainsothattheycouldcorrecttheirmistakesinnotimewhichhavebeenmade.

Onthecontrary,withnegativeattitude,theywillabandonthemselvesandlosetheirconfidence.

Atlast,Theywillneversparenoeffortstostruggle,Inmyopinion,weshouldmaintainthefirstkind,onlyinthiswaycanwesucceedatlast!

第二篇

Wemiddleschoolstudentshavehadmanytestsandexams.Wehavebothachievedsuccessandsufferedfromfailure.Differentstudentsholddifferentattitudestofailure.

Somefallinlowspiritswhentheydon'tdowellintheexams.Theyloseheartandnolongerstudyhardasbefore.

Butmoststudentstakeanactiveattitudetowardsfailure.TheyfindoutthecausessothattheywillnotmakethesimilarmistakesIagreewiththosewithactiveattitudes.

Asweknow,Failureisthemotherofthesuccess.evengreatmenhavefailmanytimesbeforethesucceedSowemustdealwithourmistakescorrectly.

请打分,附细则

黄全荣回答:
  从高一的教学要求来看,   第一篇24分,句子结构与语法略有些水平,但是观点阐述稍微有点不太清晰,条理略有欠缺.   第二篇22分,虽然条理清晰,但是句子结构与用词比较单调,不容易拿高分.   两篇作文都略有语法错误,不过尚不影响大局.
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