Everyyearmanypeoplegethurtorlosetheirlivesintrafficaccident.Howcanweobeythetrafficrules?First,inmostofChina,wekeepontherightoftheroad.Second,beforewecrosstheroad,wemuststopandlookbothways—lookleft,lookrightandlookleftagain.Third,wemustdon’tplayonthestreet.
Last,it’sgoodtohelpchildrenandoldpeoplecrosstheroad.
2.intrafficaccident,事故很多,用复数形式比较好trafficaccidents
3.Howcanweobeythetrafficrules?译为“我们们如何能够遵守交通规则”,上下句联系欠佳,可以换成以下几种形式：
howcanwecutdown(decrease/avoid/prevent)this?Ithinkweshouldobeythetrafficrules.
或者Thatiswhyweshouldobeythetrafficrules.（这就是我们为什么要遵守交通规则的原因)
thatiswhy.“这就是.的原因"
或：Whatshouldwedotoavoidthis?ithinkweshoudobeythesetrafficrules.
4.wekeepontherightoftheroad.换成weshouldkeeprightwhenwalkingalongtheroad.
keepright靠右
5.wemuststopandlookbothways.表示看的方向时最好用direction,换成wemuststopandlookbothdirections
6.Third,wemustdon’tplayonthestreet.语法错误,换成：Third,wemustn’tplayonthestreet.表示禁止做…
7.Last,it’sgoodtohelpchildrenandoldpeoplecrosstheroad.
英语时间顺序的表达应该是：first,second,then,atlast/finally；last换成atlast或者finally
it’sgoodtodosth.和helpsb(to)dosth：to可以省略,这两个句型结构用的好,表达清楚,简洁.
参考例句(文)
1.howcanwecutdown(decrease/avoid/prevent)this?
2.Thatiswhyweshouldobeythetrafficrules.（这就是我们为什么要遵守交通规则的原因)
3.Whatshouldwedotoavoidthis?ithinkweshoudobeythesetrafficrules.
4.weshouldkeeprightwhenwalkingalongtheroad.
5.wemustn’tplayonthestreet
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