高考英语作文
假如你是李华,对今年一月出现的严重雾霾记忆犹新,认为绿色生活方式对于改善空气质量十分有益.请根据下列要点写一篇短文,向校刊“英语角”栏目投稿.
简述雾霾情况倡导绿色生活
持续三周左右
影响全国多地乘坐公交出行
乘坐公交出行节约水电纸张
注意:1.词数:100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
GreenerAir,CleanerLife(标题是题目带的)
Smogisserioius,withmanykindsofdiseases,reallyaffectpeople’slives.Smogmeansseriousairpollution,andwecan’tlivewithoutair.Dirtyairisharmfultoourbodies.Recently,heavysmogarrivesinourcountry,whichremainsthreeweeklong.
TheheavysmogaffectmanyplacesinChina.NorthernChina,suchasCapitalBeijing,hasbeenunderseriouspollution.Eventownsinthesoutheastareundersmog.Driverswerenotabletoseeviewsclearly,andchildrenwereencouragedtostayathome.Peoplewhowantedtogetourdoorexercisehesitated,andeveryonewasnothappywhentheyseethegreysky.
Iadvocatethatweliveacleanerlife.Takingbusesinsteadofdrivingcarsseemsagoodidea,andrecycledwaterisalsoamust.Pickingupwastepaperonthefloorandalsoreduceunnecessarywaste.Avoidsettingofftoomanyfirecrackersduringfestivals.Wecanalsosupervisetheemissiondischargedbyfactories.
Ibelievethatwecanhavegreenerairandliveacleanerlifeintheend!
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