求修改一篇英语作文,
Everyonewantstosucceed.SodoI.Buttherearealotofdifficultiesonthewaytosucceedandstopusfrombeingsucceed.So,howcanwedo?Therearesomeadvicetoyou.
First,youshouldsetagoal.Becauseagolecanmakeyoukonwwhatshouldyoudoandletyougotowardstosuccessallthetime.Second,youmustmakeaplanforyouagoal.Thisisakeytosuccess.Duetothefactthat,aplanwillletyouunderstandthenextsetclearly.Andthen,youwillneartothesuccess.Third,youhavetohaveanever-give-upattitude.Likethis,youwillbesucceednearly.Because,allofeverything'sresultcomefromeverybody'sattitude.
Theseareallmysuggestions.Ithinkifyoudothingslikethese,youwillbesucceedinthefuture.Atlast,beliebeinyourself.Beacusethereisasaying:"Thereisawill,thereisaway"
希望高手可以帮我认真修改,耽误之际是看看看语法有没有误!必须在十点之前,
还有,最后一句谚语我们老师说是“thereisawill,thereisaway”有志者事竟成
但是我看网上的都是“WhereThereIsaWillThereIsaWay“,写哪一个?