求修改高中英语作文
Lastautumn,weallsenior2studentswenttosuburbtotakepartina"learningfromfarmers"activity.Therearelotsofwonderfulmemoriesduringtheseven-daytrip.
Farawayfromdowntownarea,thenaturalscenerymadeallofussurprised.Inthedaytime,Icouldseeglossyfieldsasfarastheeyecouldreachandlistentorooster‘crowing.Aftersunset,thenightskyhungdown,filledwithshiningstars.Insuchawonderfulenvironment,ourpressureonstudywasrelievedandourheartswerequite,
Withthecompanyofclassmates,ourdailylifewasfullofhappylaughersandcheerfulvoices.Weslepttogether,atetogetheranddidfarmworktogether,withstrengthenedourfriendshipsandtheunderstandingtoeachother.Inleisuretime,someofusrehearsedourprogrammesrepeatedlywhichwouldbeplayedinfrontofallstudentsandteachersattheeveningpartyinthelastnight.Whenthenightcome,ourpromgrammesgainedapplauseresoundedthroughthefall.
Inasecond,thesedayshasbeenawayforayear.Buttheunforgettabledaysandnightsthatwespenttogetheralwaysappearinmymindlikeamovie.
写得笨拙,希望可指出错误或不完善处,并提出修改建议.今晚截止啊,明天就要考试了